Story Crafting series

Every question is a micro-story

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Every question is a micro-story

Alfi Oloo

Alfi Oloo

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Jan 1, 2025

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From Seedling to Story Tree: Crafting Your Narrative Branches

Dawn breaks over a garden where yesterday's careful planting has birthed the first green shoots of possibility. Your seed question has taken root, nourished by research and watered with purpose. Through patient cultivation, it grew into a seedling of sub-questions - each small twig a promise of what might become.

Yet between this tender sapling and the towering story tree lies a critical transformation. Those modest twigs must thicken into branches strong enough to bear the weight of revelation, conflict, and change. Each branch needs its own arc of tension, its own moment of truth.

This transformation from outline to full narrative requires three key elements. First, each sub-question must develop its own dramatic stakes - what hangs in the balance if this particular part of the story fails to resonate. Second, we identify the obstacles that create tension and drive the narrative forward. Finally, we craft moments of transformation that reveal deeper truths and move our audience to new understanding.

My TEDx talk on education illustrates this process. The seed question "What should education look like when knowledge is no longer scarce?" grew into several essential narrative threads. One branch explored my personal journey as a dropout, building tension through the contrast between traditional education's failures and the discovery of self-directed learning. Another branch examined systemic challenges, revealing how outdated teaching methods clash with modern learning needs. Each branch contributed its own vital perspective while strengthening the whole.

What you'll learn here

We'll explore how to grow your story from the sapling outline of sub-questions from step 3:

  • The hub-and-spoke approach to story-crafting, allowing you to build flexible, interconnected narratives around your central question

  • Cultivating key narrative branches from each sub-question with stakes, obstacles, and transformation,

  • Guiding each branch's development with setting, dialogue, and character growth.

  • A exercise for turning any sub-question into a complete narrative.

  • How to use this abundance of narrative material flexibly, adapting your story to different audiences and occasion on-the-fly.

With our outline we're now ready to flesh out each part with vivid detail and meaningful conflict. This process transforms abstract ideas into compelling narrative moments that capture and hold attention. Let's examine how to build these essential story elements, one branch at a time.

The Hub-and-Spoke Approach to Narrative Design

Great stories emerge not from memorized scripts but from understanding how ideas interconnect. Picture your narrative as a bicycle wheel - at its center lies your seed question, with stories and ideas radiating outward like spokes. Each spoke supports the whole while standing independently, allowing you to move naturally between stories as you engage with your audience.

Dr. Jordan Peterson demonstrates this elegant structure in his lectures, building complex narratives that spiral back to a central question. When you understand these connections deeply, your storytelling becomes fluid and responsive rather than rigid and rehearsed.

Developing a Single Branch: A Case Study in Education

Let's examine how this works in practice. From my TEDx talk's seed question - "What should education look like when knowledge is no longer scarce?" - emerged a vital subquestion: "If knowledge is abundant, what becomes scarce instead?"


The Three Essential Building Blocks

To transform this abstract query into a compelling narrative, we need three foundational elements that give our story both structure and soul:

  1. Stakes - The Heart of Why It Matters: Traditional education's focus on memorization left students like myself feeling lost and disconnected. The stakes transcended academic success - they touched on human potential and the risk of losing countless bright minds to an outdated system. When developing your own stakes, search for the deeper human impact that makes your audience lean forward and think, "This matters to me."

  2. Obstacles - Creating Tension and Movement: My story confronted the deeply ingrained belief that knowledge accumulation equals learning. The real obstacle wasn't just leaving college; it was challenging an entire paradigm that measured success by information retention rather than understanding. Your obstacles should represent more than physical barriers - they should embody the resistance to change that makes your story worth telling.

  3. Transformation - Revealing Deeper Truth: My journey led to a profound realization: when knowledge becomes abundant, wisdom becomes scarce. This transformation wasn't just personal - it suggested a fundamental shift in how we approach education, focusing on developing judgment rather than storing information. Your transformation should illuminate something universal through the lens of specific experience.


Tools for Bringing Your Branch to Life

With these foundations in place for the story branch we further strengthen it’s narrative impact using three tried and tested storytelling tools:

  1. Setting - Grounding in Reality: The fluorescent-lit library where I spent countless hours memorizing soon-forgotten facts becomes more than a location - it embodies the sterile approach to learning I sought to challenge. Your setting should work as both physical space and metaphor.

  2. Dialogue - Capturing Authentic Moments: My mentor's observation - "Knowledge isn't what's scarce anymore. What's scarce is the wisdom to use it" - distilled years of experience into a single, memorable moment. Choose dialogue that crystallizes key insights rather than merely reporting conversation.

  3. Character Development - Growth Through Challenge: My evolution from discouraged dropout to someone who discovered education's true meaning demonstrates how obstacles and transformation intersect in a single character arc. Show your audience change happening rather than simply stating that it occurred.


From Framework to Action

Let's put these concepts into practice with a structured process for developing narrative branches:

Take your seed question or any sub-question and find a quiet moment to explore it fully. Write it at the center of a blank page. For our education example, we might start with "If knowledge is abundant, what becomes scarce instead?"

Begin by identifying the stakes. Consider who is affected and how deeply this question matters. Write down specific moments when this question touched your life or others' lives directly. Notice which details spark emotion or reveal deeper significance.

Next, examine the obstacles in your story. What beliefs, systems, or circumstances stand in the way of addressing this question? Look for tension between how things are and how they could be. Consider both external challenges and internal resistance to change.

Then explore the transformation. How did engaging with this question change your understanding or approach? What insights emerged that might help others navigate similar challenges? Focus on specific moments where perspective shifted or new possibilities opened up.

Now enrich these elements with concrete details. Place your story in specific settings that readers can see and feel. Recall actual conversations that captured key insights. Show how people, including yourself, evolved through confronting these challenges.

The Power of Abundance in Storytelling

As you develop each sub-question into a full narrative branch, you'll likely discover more stories than you need for any single presentation. This abundance becomes your greatest asset. The hub-and-spoke approach allows you to select and arrange these stories flexibly, adapting to different audiences and occasions.

Think of yourself as a curator rather than a performer. When preparing for a specific event, you can choose which stories best serve your audience's needs and interests. A technical conference might call for different examples than a community workshop, even though both draw from the same core narrative tree.

In our final article, we'll explore this process of pruning and polishing. You'll learn to select the most effective combinations of stories for different settings while maintaining the coherence of your central message. Until then, focus on growing your story branches with care and attention to detail. Each one adds to the richness of your narrative ecosystem, giving you more options for creating meaningful connections with your audience.

Until our next conversation,
Alfi

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